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PostSubject: Evan Daan    Fri Oct 22, 2010 11:32 am

Name:Evan Daan
Age:24
Planet of Birth:None
Family:Father:Kyal Daan, Mother:???, Sister:Kat Daan
Codename:
Race:Human
Grander:Male
Outlook:
Evan got dark medium hair, blue eyes, small nose and he is about 190 cm tall and 60KG weight. He's not strong builded, looks normal
Following class:Adept Healer
History:
Evan Daan is son of Kyal Daan, Merchant from Corellia. He was born on ship with course from Coruscant to Dantooine. Evan' Father met there one of his friends, Ruran Andrian Jedi Master.
I don't think you should take him on that long journal.-Said Kyal and he sat down near his wife.- He isn't ready.
Yes He is-Said Ruran Irritated.- You know you can't change his destiny... I know you left order but still... Let me take him.
Okay... Okay...-Accepted Exile.- Just... Let me say Good Bye to him.
Kyal walked over to small boy and crouched.
- Hey Evan! How are you son?-Kyal asked with smile on face
-Good Daddy!-Evan said happy. Then he pointed on Twi'lek.-Who is that dad?!
-Its my friend. He will take you... on a trip... And then you will meet with dad! Now boy go! Just make dad proud.- Kyal hugged him and boy ran to Ruran
-Force help him...- Said Kyal quietly.

LIFE IN ORDER
Evan before he was taken to temple He spent three years on planet Dantooine. There he started to learn about force and history of Jedi Order. He liked his master much. One day he asked him.
-Master Ruran?! When I gonna meet dad again?- Evan asked making a odd look on Ruran.
-Oh child... I don't know...- Ruran answered and took Evan with him to ship.- We are going to temple now. As I guess you packed up everything?
-Of course Master!- He jumped happy.
-For Force... He is so happy all the time- Thought Twi'lek.
When they arrived at temple Evan met Master Yoda. He inspected child and said
-Young one. From family of Daan's you are.
-Yes Master Yoda... My dad is Kyal Daan!- Said proud Evan.
Yoda looked again at child and told him to follow.
They arrived at Evan' room.
Evan left his small bag at room and jumped on bed.
-Tomorrow will be great day!- He smiled.
His life in order as child wasn't good. Other Younglings didn't like Evan. Specially that after Master Yoda told him truth about his father that he is an exile.
Everyone laughed because of his father. But then one of younglings Mulran Linaki poked him and asked.
-Are you Evan? I hear'd about your father. Ignore others... They will get their lesson.
Evan was suprised that some one finally spoke to him normal.
After that day Mulran and Evan became friends. They together completed training as younglings and became Padawan's.
Evan was gave as Padawan to his old Master Ruran. Together they fought in Clone Wars. Five Years before end of CW Evan was passing his trials for Knight.
Evan and Mulran had same love. Kayna Jorel. She was young one year only. She was beatiful, with long ginger hair and blue eyes.
Padawan's were always having fights which one of them she will choose. But one day while mission on Felucia, Master Ruran, Mulran, Evan and Kayna met an army of CIS. Mulran ran right into. Kayna and Evan after him. Girl was injured by one of Super Battle Droid. Evan wanted to save her but he didn't have enough experience in Force Healing. Because of her death relationship between Evan and Mulran started to be complicated. Evan because of accident learned more force powers.
-This is your day Evan!- Said Ruran- Now go... Master's are waiting for you.
Evan step into room.
We are all Jedi. The Force speaks through us. Through our actions, the Force proclaims itself and what is real.
Today we are here to acknowledge what the Force has proclaimed.-Master Yoda said- Step forward, Padawan. Evan Daan by the right of the Council,
by the will of the Force, I dub thee Jedi Knight of the Republic. Take up your lightsaber, Evan Daan, Jedi Knight. And may the Force be with you.
Evan left room as new Jedi Knight.
FALL OF ORDER
Four Years after passing. Evan was training in Training room. Then Mulran walked to him. Evan sensed him fast.
-Mulran?! Its you? We didn't meet...- Said Evan suprised.
-Yes it's me Evan! I hear'd you are a knight.- Mulran smiled.
-Yes. You got right information.
-I am knight too...
-That's amazing!
-I know...
- Hey What is it?
- I am here... Because... Master Yoda said... You won't be here anymore... You will be moved... Out of here...
-What?! Why?
- I told them to do it! You don't know how much I hated you all those years!-Shouted Mulran
- What?! What are you talking about?!- Asked Evan suprised.
- Remember her? You made her dead! ITS ALL YOUR FAULT!- Shouted Mulran with anger
- You wanted it!- Evan took lightsaber and they started to fight.
Evan was better in dueling skills so he fast defeated enemy.
- Last word? - Evan asked
- Dark Side is my ally...
Evan cutted off Mulran's head. Then Master Ruran ran in.
-Evan?! What you did?! - Ruran asked suprised.
-I.. I did favor for order...- Evan answered sad.
After that Evan has been demoted to Adept rank.
Year later Order has been destroyed because of Order 66. Evan is one of survivors of massacre in temple.

Character voice:Sad, low.
Weapons:Lightsaber, Yellow collor
Equipment:Robe, Guitar, Small cup, Datapad's
Force Powers:Jump level 2, Push lvl2,Pull lvl2, Heal lvl 2, Absorbe lvl 2, Sense lvl 2, Speed lvl 2, Defence 2, Attack 2,Throw 2
Faction:Jedi Order (Survivor)
Character Theme:
First meeting

Memories

Theme

Favourite song(Guitar only)

Reflection's




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PostSubject: Re: Evan Daan    Sat Oct 23, 2010 6:15 pm

You can help yourself looking at this story, and i mean looking not ripoffing, whatever....also i noted some slight mistakes on the bio, be sure to correct them by checking the sensitive rules systems and all. Good Luck with the bio, as i look forward to this biography.


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PostSubject: Re: Evan Daan    Sun Oct 24, 2010 12:31 am

Okay Thanks. I am working on it atm. This one is only "beta" one.
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PostSubject: Re: Evan Daan    Mon Oct 25, 2010 2:04 am

Go evan, make it goooooooood. Ur my favourite jedi untill now xD
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PostSubject: Re: Evan Daan    Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:05 pm

Alright, i'll approve it, correct the force point's read the system i didn't had time to check and chose a ground of the force ect....I'll move it once you're done with the Editiong, have fun Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Evan Daan    Wed Nov 03, 2010 3:07 pm

He is adept to be honest Razz.
And edited
Like From Atris system:
"Adept:
Force Focused - Has succefully mastered core powers on rank 2 and 2 chosen Alternative Powers on rank 2, saber attack 2, saber defend 2, 2 points on throw, 2 points on jump"
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PostSubject: Re: Evan Daan    Tue Nov 16, 2010 1:10 am

So, aproved?
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PostSubject: Re: Evan Daan    Tue Nov 16, 2010 1:31 am

Yes. You will move it to approved though. Since that is your job!

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PostSubject: Re: Evan Daan    Tue Nov 16, 2010 1:34 am

All my moderate powers are gone somehow. GIVE ME BACK MAH POWARS
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